I got Fairy Tale back from the beta reader on Thursday and meant to make a post about it, but I didn’t. Now that I’ve had a chance to read through her comments and made some much needed edits, the book is much better.
I even wrote a proper ending. In both of the first two books I wrote an “epilogue” type chapter that sort of tied everything up and moved us to the next book. I didn’t do that in Fairy Tale. I just left it right after this super emotional scene… which was so annoying to the beta that it ruined the whole book.
Which is why I wrote another chapter that sums it all up and leads us right into Pursuit. Then I wrote an extra chapter in Pursuit that leads us into Lillim 5.
It’s called Hard Boiled and takes place back on Earth.
In other news, Kill It With Magic hit #12 on the top 100 Paranormal and Urban Fantasy category on Amazon, which I’m counting as a win.
I’m expecting Hatter back from the editor next week (he was sick and asked for an extra week), but we’ll see with Christmas and all. You should be able to buy it in early January. You should, it’s at least twice as good as Kill It with Magic. Way less bumpy.